In-class writing: A letter to Ann

Dear Ann,

After reading your article about dog food, I really appreciate your great exploring sprit. More importantly, your article prevents another horrifying tragedy from happening. Actually, I am fond of animals especially cats and dogs so I pay attention to what they eat. I have been interested in pet food since the first time I saw it in the supermarket. Those beautifully designed packaging and lovely advertising of pet food left me deep impression. I am always longing to try it until I saw your article.

At first, you vividly show me how bad the taste of dog food is and how low nutritional quality is by your detailed description. You talk about the disgusting taste of the dog food comparing it to Play-Doh, making me feel like I am chewing Play-Doh. My beautiful illusions about pet food totally collapsed. Besides, your focus turns to the misleading advertising tactics and slogans of pet food which are used by the food companies. How ridiculous they are!

Thanks for making me know the truth and please keep your exploring spirit in the future.

Best,

Sea