2013年4月29日星期一

In-class writing: Writing from the picture


My lucky day

He Haiyun Sea
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You could never image how eager I am to get rid of Katy, who is the most horrible girl in the world. She is heavy but always likes to wear under-size dresses. She thinks she was smart but always makes things a mess. She says she is the most popular girl at school but no one even wants to get closer to her. But somehow such a weird girl started to pursue me several days ago and kept asking me to date her, which almost became my nightmare. Therefore, I decided to meet her and make her hate me as much as possible.
I invited her to go for a drive with me on that day and intentionally drove my broken car. Maybe only god knew that clunker was almost written off. I drove her to a desolate and forsaken place where normal people would never come and said many offensive and impolite words on the road, making her look uncomfortable. After a while, as expected, my car broke down. I pretended to be helpless and just kept swearing all the time, which must be stupid enough to make her hate me. She stood from a distance from me, crossed her arms and finally said: “I don’t want to see you anymore!”
Fortunately, she has not contacted me since last time we met. I am sure that day is absolutely my lucky day. It is so wonderful that I do not need to see her again!

2 条评论:

  1. An interesting way to write the causal analysis in-class writing. Good idea to use a short but funny story to explain the cause and effect of a single picture.

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  2. I am always surprised at your imagination!!! And I agree with rikas! I love stories, haha. You explain the cause and effect in a very different way!

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